Explain how your simile works, what is it doing? Does it create an image in the reader's head? How? Does it add more description? How?
E.g.
The Queen looked as fresh and pretty as a daffodil on a spring day.
My simile compares the queen to a daffodil as this is similar to the colour she was wearing. She also looked fresh and new like a spring day.
Kate Middletons dress was as white as fresh snow
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The Queen looked like a ripe bannana recently picked from the bannana tree.
ReplyDeleteMy simile compares the queen to a bannana.
Princess Katherine Middleton looked as beautiful as an Angel.
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My comment compares the dress to white snow
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Beatrice's hat looked like an octopus swimming in the ocean.
ReplyDeletethe queen looked as yellow as bumblebee
ReplyDeleteThe white dresses are as bright as fresh snow, glistening in the morning sunlight
ReplyDeleteThe Queen is beautiful as a flower.
ReplyDeleteThe royal family are as great as coca cola on a hot summers day :)
ReplyDeletePippa is as pretty as a rose.
ReplyDeleteI'm comparing the bridesmaide dresses to the snow
ReplyDeleteThe white dresses are as white as freash snow from the sky on a cold winter'ws night.
ReplyDeleteim compering the white dresses to snow on a cold winter night.
Kate's face was as red as a ripe tomato as she walked down the aisle.
ReplyDeleteI'm comparing Kate's face to a ripe tomato.:D
prince william is as red as a tomato
ReplyDeleteThe choir was as loud as a rocket taking off.
ReplyDeleteIm comparing the choirs noise to a rocket launch
The Queen Was as bright as a lemon.
ReplyDeleteI am Comparing the Queen with a Lemon
ReplyDeletethe queen is as yellow as the sun
ReplyDeleteKates dress was as Beautiful as a Red Rose (:
ReplyDeleteI am comparing Kates dress with a red rose (:
ReplyDeletethe qouir was as loud as a dog barking at a cat.
ReplyDeleteThe prince's uniform is as fancey as french fries. I am comparing William's uniform to french fries. :)
ReplyDeletePrince Harry looked as offical as a General in the army
ReplyDeleteI am saying that Prince Henry looked like he was wearing a Army uniform
the queen looked like a leomon
ReplyDeleteonly if i was a prince all the girls would come for me
ReplyDeletekate looked almost as pretty as curry
ReplyDeletethe royal wedding is as royal as jesus.
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