Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Juicy writing

A long time ago there was a Hot Dog Factory. Kids went there and helped make hot dogs. The kids earned free hot dogs for working. Once, there was a kid who hated hot dogs that went there. He was getting paid to sabotage the hot dog-making machines. He was also promised a bonus if he messed up the already-made hot dogs. He sneaked some Chilli Sauce in the hot dogs, and sabotaged the machines by cooking pieces of metal in them. Mr O'William, the owner of the factory, had to close it down. The kid's employer paid well. Mr O'William is currently working on fixing the machines so he can reopen the factory.

By David.

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